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The Angriest Birds
The ping of the slingshot as painful as a papercut between the fingers,
As angry as a crazy crocodile,
Accelerating like Usain Bolt's trainers,
Whizzing through the air like a red hot tomato,
Flying like a tiny grenade,
Screaming like a skidding bus.
Explosive eggs dropping for destruction,
Sacrificing their lives for hope for the future.
Treacherous towers to pulverise the pigs,
Smashing like a crashing plane,
Exploding so dramatically,
TNT demolishing toppling towers.
By St. George's Class
Which is your favourite line? Why?
Can you spot a simile?
Can you spot some alliteration?
Can you spot an internal rhyme?
16 comments:
I LOVE POETRY SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
MUCH!
that poem was aaawwwsssooommmee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
learnig about agry birds makes me a happy bird
Today we played angry birds!
I really enyoyed making that poem the other day
I really enjoyed reading the poem thanks Miss.Benn for making it : )
i love learning about anry birds
I really anjoyed tagxedo
I like this poem because it is very persuasive
Amelie c said i'm so happy were learning about angry birds
this is a woderfull poem
THis was fun can we do it again
in the poem my favourite bit was mine
I loved doing are angry bird poem
Yes the iternal rhyme I found was Smashing like a crashing plain
One bright afternoon my mother told me to get her. A magic ring that obeys commands.I said"do i have to?"and she said absolutely so i done it.When i got to the jewelry shop there was a big fat butcher as the shopkeeper,he said you are too young to be going out by yourself.I asked him for a ring but he said no.Luckily i remembered that i had a mini hammer in my pocket so i SMASHED! the glass and took the ring without the pig-nosed butcher seeing me.
When i got home i called out mummy mummy! look i have got you a ring.She said well done son but i hope you haven't stolen it from anywhere.Oh no i said i haven't stolen it from anywhere mum you better not or ELSE!... i will have your blood for my drink and your meat for dinner and bones and skin are leftovers for homeless people. (if they would eat it but i think they won't)
I raced of to my friend's house Riley and said to him"i have told a fib and if my mother finds out i would never see you again because i would be cooked with BBQ sauce ."OOH i get it now" said Riley you would be dead.Yes yes that's what i mean.
Let me see what i can do about that said Riley i know when your mother is not there you can sneak up to her room and take the ring to the jewelry shop and then just pay.My mother is hardly ever gone shopping i said. Anyway she always locks her door. This is my plan for the 500 word story
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