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Chapter 4
Table 1
Mario and Rumplestiltskin came closer and closer to Phil.
Phil shut his eyes and wished but then he saw the hat lying beside him and fell
unconscious. Phil woke up in a prison cell wondering where he was until Mario
and Rumplestiltskin started staring at him.
In the dark cell, Mario kicked the cap into the cage and
said, “You can play baseball with this cap.” The Hat of Ultimate Transportation
was in the cell next to him. One of the 12 princesses was in the corner crying
so Phil said, “Why are you crying?”
“Because my sister is gone!”
Phil said, “Where is your sister?”
“I don’t know,” said the princess, “we can’t dance without
her.”
“Maybe I can find her and you can come with me? Follow me!”
The princess said, “Are you sure about this?”
“I’m sure! I have been here before.”
Phil and the princess disappeared.
Phil turned around and saw two dark reflections a yard
behind him. He saw a yeti and made a plan. He said to the hat, “Make me go on
the yeti!”
Table 2
“What are you doing here?” boomed Rumplestiltskin. “Actually, don’t answer that. We’ve got
visitors coming and I don’t want YOU distracting our preparations.” And with
that he prodded Phil into the jail and stomped out, Mario close behind him.
It was uncomfortably hot in the cell and Phil was squished
in with the princesses, who squashed him so tight he could barely breathe. He
was just about to try and start a conversation, when he heard voices coming
towards him.
They got closer and closer, and suddenly Goldilocks flounced
in! He yelled out for her to help, but as she got closer, her smile got more
and more menacing. Without a word she dragged him out of the cage and into the
living room, where he saw the Big Bad Wolf lounging in an armchair.
The wolf rose up, a sack in one hand, which he then plunged
over Phil, who knew nothing more until…
Table 3
Suddenly, a ball came flying in through the window. It hit
the cage that the princesses were in. Then
the door screeched and Big Bully Billy walked in. While Mario and
Rumplestiltskin were dealing with Billy, Phil crept up and took the key from
Mario’s pocket.
Phil crept back to the cage and opened the door of the cage.
It squeaked open and Mario and Rumplestiltskin turned round. Phil grabbed a
candy stick from the wall and whacked Mario in the face! Rumplestiltskin bent
down to help him and that was their chance to escape.
They landed in the woods, back where they started. They remembered
the last princess that was still trapped in a sack by Mario. Phil put
marshmallows under his feet and jumped up to the castle…
Table 4
Then candles lit around the wall of the castle. Mario and
Rumplestiltskin walked over to the cage. They said, “Which one of you will come
with us?”
Ten stepped back and one immediately stepped forward and
said, “Take me, my hero!”
Then Rumplestiltskin said, “Let’s go on a date my dear, just
you, me, Mario and his girl.” Then Mario pulled the other princess out of the
bag and she kissed him on the cheek. They walked out and locked the door. Then Phil
set the other princesses free and they each thanked him with a kiss on the
cheek.
They all escaped with the Hat of Ultimate Transportation. Then
Phil put on the hat, he held hands with the princesses and they all held hands together.
He said, “Take us to wherever Mario and Rumplestiltskin are.” It took them to
the Great Wall of China. Phil couldn’t believe his eyes, he had always wanted
to go there, since he was four.
Then Phil saw Mario and Rumplestiltskin, they had the two
princesses on a date, they were just about to climb the Great Wall of China
when…
Table 5
“So you found our little hide out?” said a familiar voice.
“Who’s there?!” said Phil.
“Don’t you remember us? We are Rumplestiltskin and Mario. Do
you like our collection of princesses?”
“I’ll tell you what I don’t like- you going round stealing the Princesses of
Sweetland.” Phil ran towards Mario with his fist scrunched up ready to punch.
As soon as Phil threw his first punch at Mario, he felt like
he had punched a brick wall. He realised Mario had swung his baseball bat and
Phil felt dizzy and stumbled towards Rumplestiltskin and fell down right at his
knees, then grabbed the keys…
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